محاولة هايكو بتشجيع من سيث

 

سلام
ايف تبنيت الثقافة اليابانية
مفاجاتك اصبحت كثيرة

 

hi eve
شال.
Use it to tie your head , that is about to explode from what u c in your day .

كْفوف.
I hope that those hands were used to
make peace
بُرنَيطة صوف.
if u warm from inside u will not need this hat
باب انفتح.
if u mean that the hope door is opened u r dreaming


باب اتسكّر.
it is your dream that broke down on the rock

of reality

شمسيّة بالإيد.

it will not protect u for ever

بس وين الهوى؟


it is there somewhere, and it will find u.
U shouldn't be looking for it, because u will not be able to find it if u searched for your whole life

good luck
yours
the master

 

If i did not know better i would have tought that you have been writing haiku for years...
i can t wait for your next haiku

 

the master is getting on my nerves eve.
(you new friend,you know who)

 

anonymous,
amen!

 

هايكو يا ايف:))))
يعني انا بيني و بين الشعر عداء قديم , و لكن هذه الاشعار العميقة النظيفة التي تمجد الطبيعة و الفصول تستهويني
بس لازم قول انك فاجأتيني فيها بالعربي
عاليابان يا ايف:))))))
بالمناسبة انا كمان بدي قول انو هيدا الماستر تبعك بلش يضربلي على اعصابي
ضربة معلّم صحيح

 

حتي الهوى تركنا و رحل

 

هل هذا هو موضوع "الرسالة" التي لم تكتمل؟

ترجمة "الهايكو" إلى العربية؟

إذا كان هيك، مافيهن الا يعطوك الدرجة!!

 

الهوى جنوبي

 

دي رموز ؟؟
مش فاهم اوي الصراحه
انتوك

 

حلوة.. ح جرب انضم للنادي قريباً.. إذا طلع معي شي!!
:P

 

احلى سلام
وين الهوى وينه
je me posais justement la même question ;)

j'aime bcp ce haiku
doux et profond ...

ravie de ta visite ;)

A très bientôt ...

 

والله ما بدري شو عم بقول
بس اللى اقدر اقوله
ان كلمه ابداع فى كلمات مخلوق للتعبير عن اسلوبك

 

love love love it
chapeau !

 

eve,
please post something....your loyal readers are waiting!

 

ya jama3a..

dont be mean to the master! :)

we are all having a good time and enjoying posts in this siber world, lets have some tolerance towards each other, at least in this world!

comments are directed to Eve here and not to us:) we are not supposed to like them or dislike them.

wa domtom li2ommatikom il 3arabiyya:P

me*

 

مش عارف الهوي يمكن يكون فين ؟
انتي عارفة ؟

 

i really miss the rainy weather....

 

hehe, glad you guys liked my Haiku. I'm thinking of doing a series of them. so let's see when episode two will be out :)
Hashem, la3younak! but it's a holiday here, and Im trying to be away from my laptop as much as possible :)
the master, ma tiz3al from the comments. I wish you try and look at my posts as a whole entity :)

 

Hi eve

I wrote a comment ,had some exams and when I return back before my vacation I found all those angry people "it is record"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

First of all, I have studied the Arabic poetry for a long time of my life and maybe this lead to this situation.
In the Arabic poetry every word represents something – in most cases something different from its original meaning-., so if u want to understand something u should break it down then look at each word as a single entity not for the poem as a whole - this what i have learned for many years-.

When I broke down the poem into small pieces, because I saw in each word a symbol for our life, I translated those symbols in the point of view of someone who learned that every word represents something different from its actual meaning.

for me if i saw the poem as a whole it will be nothing more than some words that describe the weather .


Maybe this lead to the anger of a lot of people who disagree with me , although this disagreement we will still be a loyal readers for eve and her great writings .
In the end , your own hands fingers arenot the same


And as khalid jarrar said :
this space should be dedicated to comment on eve's production not to comment on each other thoughts.



Thnx for all the angry voices .
and iam sorry again for this clash of minds.
Good luck 4 u eve
Yours
The master

 

The master,
I didn't know you studied Arabic poetry, that's interesting! ma tiz3al from the comments, they don't mean you harm :) yalla, ma tet2akhar 3layna.

 

عن جد محاولة موفقة إيف :)


وعن مزح إيمت راح يكون في محاولة "اللاندي" ـ
:D

 

لاندي؟ ما فهمت الكلمة، شو يعني؟ :)

 

"اللاندي"
هو اشعار شعبية سرية ترتجلها النساء البشتونيات ،ترجم الكثير منها إلى اللغة العربية،
من يقرأها يستغرب ان من كتبها نساء محرومات نجين من الوأد وهن صغار بأعجوبة ولكنهن وجدن طريقة للتعبير عن مشاعرهن بهذه الاشعار

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